Group D :
Nicolas Gustiawan
Deddy Armanto
Agus Sudari
Mustaqim Firma
Section 2
Structure And Writer Expression
1. The attorney told his client that . . . .
answer : they had a little chance to winning the case
2.One of the proffesor's greatest atribute is . . . .
answer : his ability to lecture
3.The Bank sent a notice to its customers which contained . . . .
answer : a reminder that the interest rates would rise the following month
4.. . . . was the day before yesterday.
Answer : France`s Independence Day
5.It was not until she had arrived home . . . . remembered her appointment with the doctor
Answer : that she
6.George would certainly have attended the proceedings . . . .
Answer : had he not had a flat tire
7.. . . . received Law degrees as today
Answer : Never have so many women
8.The students liked that professor`s course because. . . .
Answer : there was little or no homework
9.George . . . . he could improve his test scores, but he did not gave enough time to study
Answer : knew how
10.. . . . he would have come to class
Answer : If Mike had been able to finish his homework
11.Lee contributed fifty dollars, but he wishes he could contribute . . . .
Answer : another fifty
12.The people at the party were worried about Janet because no one was aware . . . . she had gone.
Answer : of where
13. Fred`s yearly income since he changed professions has . . . .
Answer : nearly tripled
14.Nancy hasn`t begun working on her Ph.D . . . . working on her master`s
Answer : yet because she is still
15.The director of this organization must know . . . .
Answer : how to manage money, sell his product, and satisfy the stockholders
16. She wishes that we DIDN'T SEND HER THE CANDY yesterday BECAUSE she`s ON a diet.
Use “don’t”
17. They are PLANNING ON ATTENDING the convention NEXT month, and SO I AM
I guess “so I am” can replaced with “me” :p
18. Today was SUCH BEAUTIFUL DAY that I couldn`t BRING myself TO COMPLETE all MY CHORES.
19. WHILE THEY were away at the beach, they allowed THEIR NEIGHBORS USE theirbarbeque grill.
“use” shall replace with “used”
20. The artist tried STIMULATE INTEREST in painting BY TAKING his students TO THE museums.
21. Mumps ARE a very COMMON DISEASE WHICH USUALLY affects children
“are” shall replace with “is”
22. Nancy said THAT she WENT TO the supermarket BEFORE COMING home
“went” can replaced with “go”
23. BEFORE she moved here, Arlene had BEEN president OF THE organization SINCE four years.
“since” can replaced with “for”
24. Each OF THE nurses REPORT to the operating room when his or HER NAME IS CALLED.
25. The ATHLETE, together WITH HIS COACH and several relatives, ARE traveling to the Olympic Games.
We can add “they” before to be “are”
26. Professor Duncan TEACHES BOTH ANTHROPOLOGY as well as sociology EACH FALL.
27. My brother is IN California ON vacation, but I wish he WAS here so that he could help ME REPAIR MY CAR.
“was” shall replaced with “is”
28. I CERTAINLY appreciate HIM TELLING us about the delay in DELIVERING the materials because we had planned to begin work tomorrow.
29. The chemistry instructor explained the experiment IN SUCH OF A WAY that it WAS EASILY UNDERSTOOD.
30. Rudolph Nureyev HAS BECOME one of THE GREATEST DANCER that the ballet world has EVER KNOWN.
“Dancers” not “Dancer” because not only Rudolph Nureyev who get the title
31. He has LESS friends in HIS classes now THAN he had LAST YEAR.
We can replace “less” with “a bit”, I guess :p
32. The town we visited WAS a FOUR-DAYS journey from our hotel, so we TOOK the train instead OF THE BUS.
33. The influence of the NATION'S Literature, art, and SCIENCE HAVE captured WIDESPREAD attention.
Use “has” because they are organisation
34. The leader emphasized THE NEED FOR JUSTICE and equality BETWEEN his PEOPLE.
We can replace “between” with “of”
35. MANY of the population in the RURAL AREAS is COMPOSED of manual LABORERS.
I think “many” can replaced with “a lot”
36. Several people HAVE APPARENT tried to change THE MAN'S MIND, but he refuses TO LISTEN.
37. Keith is one of THE MOST intelligent boys OF the SCIENCE class.
I think “of” can replaced with “in”
38. The girls WERE SORRY to HAD MISSED the singers WHEN they ARRIVED at the airport.
“had” is not needed here
39. When Keith visited Alaska, he LIVED in A igloo in the winter MONTHS AS WELL as in the spring.
Shall use An not A
40. The harder he TRIED, the WORST he DANCED before the LARGE audience.
“worst” shall be replced with “worth”, I guess :p
